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How long must I indure,
The mockery; the insults.
This society I'm forced to live in,
Where if you're not like everyone
Else, you become the Outcast.
A society that takes no prisoners.
A society that's cruel to it's very core.
A society that takes things away from you.
A society that provides me no comfort, no
Security......no hope.

What little comfort I find...is spread thin.
Those I truly feel safe with...are rare and few.
How long...until all hope is gone for me?
How long.........before this...this...torture, ends me?
This society is holding the rope,
And I must take the fall.......
©2009-2010 *velixer
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:icondreamnorn:
Ouch. D: I can truly see the suffering... the age old combat, man versus society, has taken another victim.

This actually is nice to read because I had a tough day. ;^; Beautifully done. I love your use of periods to stress the long pauses between the words.

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Thanks...though it saddens me to see someone else other than me having a bad day

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:icondreamnorn:
Eh... it's fine. Thousands of teenagers all over the world probably feel the same way right now.

...But that's not too comforting, is it? *sigh* Back to my angst poetry. I need to make myself feel better.

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I wish I could make myself better....but everything that would usually cheer me up is making me even more depressed :(

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:icontaplaos:
Why everyone would hurt you like that D: you need a hug from me:hug:

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I'll never know

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:icondreamnorn:
:cry: Oh well. Something tells me that we'll muddle through. *slithers to dark corner*

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Right behind you *slips into the other dark corner*

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:iconzejequzi:
it’s all about your perspective vel :D
see the good in being different you will find true friends and you won’t get "friends" that just want to be friends with you to get something from you
so it’s not what’s wrong with what you are doing its just your looking at it in the negative way

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You know what........don't talk to me for the rest of the day

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